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Rich Franco

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Raw Critique

About This Group

The purpose of this group is critique, pure and simple.

Courtesy and respect are required. Those being disrespectful, be it the person asking for critique or giving it, will be removed. There will be no warnings.

If you wish to have your an image critiqued please follow these instructions:
A. Try to critique a few images yourself first. This forum works only if those who request critiques also try to provide critiques. If you would like 10 people to respond to a critique request, try to respond to 10 critiques first. More or less. In other words, this is a give and take, not a take and take.
B. After you've read and done a few critiques, ask for a critique:
1. Go to group discussions.
2.Click on Post A New Topic Add a title to the name of your discussion (preferably the name of your art piece) and an image link (not an image upload) from your gallery to identify which piece is being submitted for evaluation.
When you ask for a critique, try to be specific with your request.
EXAMPLE: What do you do think of this composition? Do you think the colors work well together? Can you see a way for me to improve this image?
(Check previous threads for references)
3. Don't post more than one image in a discussion unless it's for comparison between two versions of the same image.
4. Wait for feedback. It varies in time and participation.
Feedback is honest. If it's a poorly done piece of work, people are going to say it. If it's well done, people will say it. This isn't a group for ego stroking, it's meant to improve work.

New Stuff!

5. If possible, let us know, which software programs you have for editing and what camera was used to create the image to be critiqued.
6.If taken with a Smart Phone, let us know the model,make.
7.When you upload an image for discussion, and you're satisfied with the suggestions and improvements, please upload the before and after to the Group images and they will be used as a 'featured image'.
8. Starting Feb. 1st,2014, Raw Critique will no longer post or accept images, unless they meet the following criteria:
A. They were uploaded and discussed on the discussion board.

OR

B. You have not sold more than $500 on FAA, to date. This is of course, on the 'Honor System'but if abused, the member will be removed from the group. This is an attempt to, in a very small way, help market new and emerging artists. Sellers here, consistently selling, do not need this, but new artists do. Please do not abuse this. There is no way, or little opportunity to'police' this, so it's'Honor Among Artists' for now.
9.If you are new to or don't feel you have a good understanding of the Photoshop-like software programs out there,the Admin, Rich Franco, will accept RAW files(preferably) from our members, limit 1 week to start and I'll gladly take a shot at 'fixing' the image to my criteria. Once fixed, it will be posted to the group. for a 'Before and After' and the artist is welcomed, if the approve of my adjustments, to upload to their site, for sale. If there are things in your image that you would like, let me know,when you send me the image, if I can, I will try and make those changes. But, I'm not a 'wizard' by any stretch, and can only do the things that I do for my own images.
10. If an artist, uploads an image and for now, only photography, and would like a numerical rating based on my opinion,(1-10), let me know. I am not qualified to do so on paintings,drawings,etc.
11. Paintings. In the past, I have contributed a small amount to the discussion,concerning paintings,etc. and can only add advice, realtive to the image as a photograph,composition,lighting,etc., other than it's a poor copy,bad crop, which is apparent. I am asking other painters to join in and get more involved,particularly, with this medium.

The eventual success of this group, will be totally based on the involvement of ALL it's members, from new artists asking for suggestions and help, to'experienced(OLD, like me)' artists, offering advice and guidance, for the emerging artists, which we all were at some time.

And mostly, let's have fun and learn!

Thank you for your participation in the Raw Critique group. Again, please be sure to also visit other threads and offer your feedback to other artists. This group is about being helpful to each other, and I want to be sure that it remains a give and take...not become a take and take.

Thank you,

Rich Franco

Thanks to Angelina Vick, for getting this to be one of the best Groups around!

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Willow Sunset

Wes and Dotty Weber

Wes and Dotty Weber - Waterdrop Collision

Waterdrop Collision

Wes and Dotty Weber

Michael Volpicelli - Grandma Volpicelli

Grandma Volpicelli

Michael Volpicelli

Edward Paul - She Came

She Came

Edward Paul

Doc Braham - Abstract #3

Abstract #3

Doc Braham

Christopher Reid - View From Creation Winery

View From Creation Winery

Christopher Reid

Edward Paul - Old Bull Lee

Old Bull Lee

Edward Paul

Lee Piper - Western Barn

Western Barn

Lee Piper

Victoria Sheridan - Green Canoe

Green Canoe

Victoria Sheridan

Phyllis Beiser - Wisdom

Wisdom

Phyllis Beiser

Mitch Shindelbower - Colorful Cave Rock Sunset

Colorful Cave Rock Sunset

Mitch Shindelbower

Mitch Shindelbower - Smoky Thunder

Smoky Thunder

Mitch Shindelbower

Phyllis Beiser - Bryan

Bryan's Catch

Phyllis Beiser

Iurie Belegurschi - This Golden Glow

This Golden Glow

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Phyllis Beiser - Reflective Perspective

Reflective Perspective

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Iurie Belegurschi - The Greatest Happiness

The Greatest Happiness

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Aron Kearney - Coming Around

Coming Around

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Where the Horses Roam

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Christopher Reid - Wave 78

Wave 78

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Iurie Belegurschi - Dreams of Budir

Dreams of Budir

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Mitch Shindelbower - Dark Side Of The Island

Dark Side Of The Island

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Phyllis Beiser - Entreat

Entreat

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Christopher Reid - Chapman

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Christopher Reid

Mitch Shindelbower - The Beach At Waimanalo

The Beach At Waimanalo

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Barb Greene Mann - The Holocaust

The Holocaust

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Brenda Plyer - Nightglow - yellow

Nightglow - yellow

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Mitch Shindelbower - Architectural Abstract

Architectural Abstract

Mitch Shindelbower

Christopher Reid - Protea Explosion

Protea Explosion

Christopher Reid

Stelios Kleanthous - Winter Morning

Winter Morning

Stelios Kleanthous

Mike Jeffries - Ministry check.

Ministry check.

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Imagine That

Amanda Eberly-Kudamik

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The Ficus Tree

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Leah Saulnier The Painting Maniac - Bar Hopping

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Leah Saulnier The Painting Maniac

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Crashing Waves 4

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Broken Soldier - Fire in the Sky

Fire in the Sky

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Wes and Dotty Weber - Under Fall

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Wes and Dotty Weber

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Ol Man From Da Bayou

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Gerard Bahon - Secret Garden

Secret Garden

Gerard Bahon

Phyllis Beiser - Delilah

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Broken Soldier - Utah Star Trails

Utah Star Trails

Broken Soldier

Wes and Dotty Weber - Valley Fog

Valley Fog

Wes and Dotty Weber

Pablo Lopez - Santa Clara Island

Santa Clara Island

Pablo Lopez

Lee Piper - Maple Lane

Maple Lane

Lee Piper

Stelios Kleanthous - Greek nets

Greek nets

Stelios Kleanthous

Edward Paul - The Cock Fight

The Cock Fight

Edward Paul

Francois Fournier - Gliding Clouds

Gliding Clouds

Francois Fournier

Broken Soldier - Park Avenue

Park Avenue

Broken Soldier

Jijo George - Heaven and Earth

Heaven and Earth

Jijo George

Broken Soldier - Utah Night II

Utah Night II

Broken Soldier

Stelios Kleanthous - Rolling Wave

Rolling Wave

Stelios Kleanthous

Phyllis Beiser - Beauty And The Beach

Beauty And The Beach

Phyllis Beiser

Edward Paul - By Far

By Far

Edward Paul

Wes and Dotty Weber - Arctic Camouflage

Arctic Camouflage

Wes and Dotty Weber

Wes and Dotty Weber - Evening Drink

Evening Drink

Wes and Dotty Weber

Edward Paul - Dark Season

Dark Season

Edward Paul

Julie Malhotra - Dreamy

Dreamy

Julie Malhotra

Wes and Dotty Weber - Milky Way Illumination

Milky Way Illumination

Wes and Dotty Weber

Stelios Kleanthous - Windsurfing

Windsurfing

Stelios Kleanthous

Jeff Burgess - Rayanne

Rayanne's peony

Jeff Burgess

Michael Frizzell - Crashing Sunset

Crashing Sunset

Michael Frizzell

Aliosha Valle -  Very young galaxy

Very young galaxy

Aliosha Valle

Wes and Dotty Weber - Nectar Hunter

Nectar Hunter

Wes and Dotty Weber

Wes and Dotty Weber -  Torrid Tilikum Crossing

Torrid Tilikum Crossing

Wes and Dotty Weber

Jijo George - Petronas tower 2

Petronas tower 2

Jijo George

Wes and Dotty Weber - Stonehenge Spin D8402

Stonehenge Spin D8402

Wes and Dotty Weber

Xn Tyler - The Coif

The Coif

Xn Tyler

Ally White - Alone

Alone

Ally White

Wes and Dotty Weber - Galactic Glory

Galactic Glory

Wes and Dotty Weber

Mitch Shindelbower - Sunset Cave Rock 2015

Sunset Cave Rock 2015

Mitch Shindelbower

Xn Tyler - Sea Anemone

Sea Anemone

Xn Tyler

Phyllis Beiser - Catch Of The Day

Catch Of The Day

Phyllis Beiser

Phyllis Beiser - Enticement

Enticement

Phyllis Beiser

David Patrick - Little Red Barn

Little Red Barn

David Patrick

Stelios Kleanthous - Elegance

Elegance

Stelios Kleanthous

Arnie Goldstein - Reaching Out

Reaching Out

Arnie Goldstein

Lee Piper - Merchants Hall

Merchants Hall

Lee Piper

Arnie Goldstein - Bad Hair Day

Bad Hair Day

Arnie Goldstein

Phyllis Beiser - Bill

Bill's Donkeys

Phyllis Beiser

Wes and Dotty Weber - Up In The Sky

Up In The Sky

Wes and Dotty Weber

Wes and Dotty Weber - Proud And Powerful

Proud And Powerful

Wes and Dotty Weber

Michael Volpicelli - Daddy

Daddy's Masterpiece

Michael Volpicelli

Arnie Goldstein - Simplicity

Simplicity

Arnie Goldstein

Jijo George - Into the future

Into the future

Jijo George

Phyllis Beiser - Koi 2

Koi 2

Phyllis Beiser

Francois Fournier - Resting Clouds

Resting Clouds

Francois Fournier

Arnie Goldstein - Rolling Hills

Rolling Hills

Arnie Goldstein

Aron Kearney - No Where Left to Go

No Where Left to Go

Aron Kearney

Wes and Dotty Weber - In A Sea Of Feathers

In A Sea Of Feathers

Wes and Dotty Weber

Stelios Kleanthous - Infinity Sea

Infinity Sea

Stelios Kleanthous

Lee Piper - Big Sky Country

Big Sky Country

Lee Piper

Wes and Dotty Weber - Snow Capped Siberian

Snow Capped Siberian

Wes and Dotty Weber

Arnie Goldstein - Paradise

Paradise

Arnie Goldstein

Beatrice BEDEUR - Spring landscape

Spring landscape

Beatrice BEDEUR

Mitch Shindelbower - A Field Of Daffodils

A Field Of Daffodils

Mitch Shindelbower

Wes and Dotty Weber - Watcher In The Woods

Watcher In The Woods

Wes and Dotty Weber

Victoria Sheridan - Solo

Solo

Victoria Sheridan

Wes and Dotty Weber - Stare Down

Stare Down

Wes and Dotty Weber

Dani Abbott - Reflections In Red

Reflections In Red

Dani Abbott

AnnaJo Vahle - Perched Hawk

Perched Hawk

AnnaJo Vahle

David Smith - Streetlamp

Streetlamp

David Smith

Stelios Kleanthous - Another Cold And Windy Day

Another Cold And Windy Day

Stelios Kleanthous

Wes and Dotty Weber - When Tigers Hide

When Tigers Hide

Wes and Dotty Weber

Elizabeth Williams - Lilacs

Lilacs

Elizabeth Williams

Wes and Dotty Weber - Stallion Strut

Stallion Strut

Wes and Dotty Weber

Christopher Reid - Tea For One

Tea For One

Christopher Reid

Wes and Dotty Weber - Backlit Arabian

Backlit Arabian

Wes and Dotty Weber

Wes and Dotty Weber - White on Black

White on Black

Wes and Dotty Weber

Radoslav Nedelchev - Woman With Pink Dress

Woman With Pink Dress

Radoslav Nedelchev

Aliosha Valle - El Guardian

El Guardian

Aliosha Valle

Aron Kearney - Lone Survivor

Lone Survivor

Aron Kearney

Beatrice BEDEUR - 011 Arbres

011 Arbres

Beatrice BEDEUR

AnnaJo Vahle - Bucolic St. John

Bucolic St. John's

AnnaJo Vahle

Michael Volpicelli - Kurt Poster

Kurt Poster

Michael Volpicelli

Stelios Kleanthous - In The Forest

In The Forest

Stelios Kleanthous

Pablo Lopez - L

L'Hemisferic

Pablo Lopez

David Smith - Causeway Arc

Causeway Arc

David Smith

Wes and Dotty Weber - Portland Waking Up

Portland Waking Up

Wes and Dotty Weber

Radoslav Nedelchev - Brown Horse

Brown Horse

Radoslav Nedelchev

Wes and Dotty Weber - An Evening Walk In Yellowstone

An Evening Walk In Yellowstone

Wes and Dotty Weber

Camille Pissarro - Prairie A Eragny

Prairie A Eragny

Camille Pissarro

Wes and Dotty Weber - Eye Contact

Eye Contact

Wes and Dotty Weber

Christopher Reid - Friesian

Friesian

Christopher Reid

Ally White - Surreal Kiss

Surreal Kiss

Ally White

Wes and Dotty Weber - Goddess of Fire

Goddess of Fire

Wes and Dotty Weber

Edward Paul - The Sanction

The Sanction

Edward Paul

Wes and Dotty Weber -

'39 Chevy Rat Rod

Wes and Dotty Weber

Christopher Reid - Crabby

Crabby

Christopher Reid

AnnaJo Vahle - Mariners Beacon

Mariners Beacon

AnnaJo Vahle

Stelios Kleanthous - Ocean Stones

Ocean Stones

Stelios Kleanthous

Arnie Goldstein - Thread the Needle

Thread the Needle

Arnie Goldstein

Wes and Dotty Weber - Daybreak at Mesa Arch

Daybreak at Mesa Arch

Wes and Dotty Weber

Christopher Reid - Wave 77

Wave 77

Christopher Reid

Alvaro Valera - Megan 1

Megan 1

Alvaro Valera

Arnie Goldstein - Coffee Break

Coffee Break

Arnie Goldstein

Christopher Reid - The Queen Of Pela Graca

The Queen Of Pela Graca

Christopher Reid

Wes and Dotty Weber - Mt Hood Starry Night

Mt Hood Starry Night

Wes and Dotty Weber

Phyllis Beiser - Lovely

Lovely

Phyllis Beiser

Arnie Goldstein - Heavenly Hostas

Heavenly Hostas

Arnie Goldstein

Wes and Dotty Weber - The Dive

The Dive

Wes and Dotty Weber

Arnie Goldstein - Anyone Have A Straw II

Anyone Have A Straw II

Arnie Goldstein

Mitch Shindelbower - Parrots

Parrots

Mitch Shindelbower

Arnie Goldstein - Drift Away

Drift Away

Arnie Goldstein

Wes and Dotty Weber - Hypnotic

Hypnotic

Wes and Dotty Weber

Mitch Shindelbower - The Eyes Of Age

The Eyes Of Age

Mitch Shindelbower

Wes and Dotty Weber - Foggy Sunrise Eagle

Foggy Sunrise Eagle

Wes and Dotty Weber

Rebecca Glaze - A Million Suns

A Million Suns

Rebecca Glaze

Wes and Dotty Weber - Nautilus

Nautilus

Wes and Dotty Weber

Phyllis Beiser - Half Shell

Half Shell

Phyllis Beiser

Edward Paul - Pull

Pull

Edward Paul

Jijo George - Marina Bay

Marina Bay

Jijo George

Mitch Shindelbower - Details From The Past

Details From The Past

Mitch Shindelbower

Wes and Dotty Weber - Lipizzan Band on the Run

Lipizzan Band on the Run

Wes and Dotty Weber

Arnie Goldstein - Some Acrobatics

Some Acrobatics

Arnie Goldstein

Wes and Dotty Weber - Painted Orchids

Painted Orchids

Wes and Dotty Weber

Edward Paul - Miles To Go

Miles To Go

Edward Paul

Gerard Bahon - Best of the West

Best of the West

Gerard Bahon

Wes and Dotty Weber - A Tiger and His Tree

A Tiger and His Tree

Wes and Dotty Weber

Edward Paul - Flashback 19

Flashback 19

Edward Paul

Jennifer Buerkle - Amber

Amber's Eyes

Jennifer Buerkle

Maja Sokolowska - Gotham painting

Gotham painting

Maja Sokolowska

Maja Sokolowska - Jimi Hendrix drawing

Jimi Hendrix drawing

Maja Sokolowska

Arnie Goldstein - Shining Star

Shining Star

Arnie Goldstein

Carlos Palacios - Peace

Peace

Carlos Palacios

Aron Kearney - Ghost Recital

Ghost Recital

Aron Kearney

Wes and Dotty Weber - Cougar On White

Cougar On White

Wes and Dotty Weber

Wes and Dotty Weber - The Wolf Pack

The Wolf Pack

Wes and Dotty Weber

Ally White - Free Spirit

Free Spirit

Ally White

Ally White - Head Full

Head Full

Ally White

Wes and Dotty Weber - Down Low And Stealthy D4788

Down Low And Stealthy D4788

Wes and Dotty Weber

Mitch Shindelbower - Dramatic Sky Over Cave Rock

Dramatic Sky Over Cave Rock

Mitch Shindelbower

Radoslav Nedelchev - Colorful Background

Colorful Background

Radoslav Nedelchev

Broken Soldier - My Cat Mozart

My Cat Mozart

Broken Soldier

Wes and Dotty Weber - Successful Hunt

Successful Hunt

Wes and Dotty Weber

Wes and Dotty Weber - Snow Dancer

Snow Dancer

Wes and Dotty Weber

Mitch Shindelbower - Glow

Glow

Mitch Shindelbower

Sonya Wilson - Bubbles

Bubbles

Sonya Wilson

Maja Sokolowska - David Bowie

David Bowie

Maja Sokolowska

Wes and Dotty Weber - The Garden Of Delights

The Garden Of Delights

Wes and Dotty Weber

Victoria Sheridan -  Male

Male

Victoria Sheridan

Phyllis Beiser - Three Part Harmony

Three Part Harmony

Phyllis Beiser

Radoslav Nedelchev - Abstract Dog

Abstract Dog

Radoslav Nedelchev

Wes and Dotty Weber - Puma

Puma

Wes and Dotty Weber

Jennifer Buerkle -  The Egg Washer

The Egg Washer

Jennifer Buerkle

Wes and Dotty Weber - Beauty Takes A Break

Beauty Takes A Break

Wes and Dotty Weber

Mitch Shindelbower - The Roots of Winter

The Roots of Winter

Mitch Shindelbower

Jennifer Buerkle - Somewhere Not Here

Somewhere Not Here

Jennifer Buerkle

Tina Wentworth - Hummingbird

Hummingbird

Tina Wentworth

Jennifer Buerkle - Smoke Break

Smoke Break

Jennifer Buerkle

Wes and Dotty Weber - Yellowstone Solitude

Yellowstone Solitude

Wes and Dotty Weber

Jennifer Buerkle - After the Beach

After the Beach

Jennifer Buerkle

Wes and Dotty Weber - Winter Wolves

Winter Wolves

Wes and Dotty Weber

Michael Volpicelli - Elephant

Elephant

Michael Volpicelli

Sotiris Filippou - Mystery

Mystery

Sotiris Filippou

Jacques Pierre Niemandt - Agony

Agony

Jacques Pierre Niemandt

Mitch Shindelbower - Winter Stream

Winter Stream

Mitch Shindelbower

Art By Ela - Red Flower

Red Flower

Art By Ela

Wes and Dotty Weber - Bighorns

Bighorns

Wes and Dotty Weber

Edward Paul - Subdrop

Subdrop

Edward Paul

Jennifer Buerkle - Little Zion Church

Little Zion Church

Jennifer Buerkle

Edward Paul - Midnight Stroll

Midnight Stroll

Edward Paul

Jennifer Buerkle - Santa Rosa

Santa Rosa

Jennifer Buerkle

Teresa Wegrzyn - Relax

Relax

Teresa Wegrzyn

Aron Kearney - Painted Sky

Painted Sky

Aron Kearney

Lee Piper - Country Life

Country Life

Lee Piper

Pablo Lopez - Atomium

Atomium

Pablo Lopez

Jijo George - Petronas tower

Petronas tower

Jijo George

Jennifer Buerkle - Wonder

Wonder

Jennifer Buerkle

Bill Swartwout - Black to the Fuchsia

Black to the Fuchsia

Bill Swartwout

Yorgo Bobolakis - Moonrise At Sunset

Moonrise At Sunset

Yorgo Bobolakis

Tony Banos - Fuente Diana

Fuente Diana

Tony Banos

Julie Senf - Rustic Beauty

Rustic Beauty

Julie Senf

Glen Murray - Before and After

Before and After

Glen Murray

Michael Volpicelli - Thich Nhat Hanh

Thich Nhat Hanh

Michael Volpicelli

Safir  Rifas - Him In The Shadow

Him In The Shadow

Safir Rifas

Sotiris Filippou - Mystique

Mystique

Sotiris Filippou

Kelly Jade King - Mister King

Mister King

Kelly Jade King

Safir  Rifas - Lilith

Lilith

Safir Rifas

Pratyasha Nithin - Saraswati

Saraswati

Pratyasha Nithin

Dale Nelson - Flamingo Resting

Flamingo Resting

Dale Nelson

Paul Hilario - Ars Meretrix

Ars Meretrix

Paul Hilario

Mary Ellen Anderson - Cody - Western Gentleman

Cody - Western Gentleman

Mary Ellen Anderson

Melissa Bittinger - Sunset Tulips

Sunset Tulips

Melissa Bittinger

Billy  Griffis Jr - Heron on a Foggy Day

Heron on a Foggy Day

Billy Griffis Jr

Lee Piper - Morning Battle

Morning Battle

Lee Piper

Arnie Goldstein - Friends

Friends

Arnie Goldstein

Safir  Rifas - Zara

Zara

Safir Rifas