Mr Lane- I meant that it's an artwork that doesn't show the same sharpness as the other ones displayed here. The title might fit the story but it distracts me from it in making me stop to compare its content to the other pieces in the group. Simply a personal opinion.
All I can say is your work is mesmerizing, David. I was looking at that more than reading the fable. LOL. But I do like the concept. Yes, you should definitely continue. Are you going to have it published as a kind of art display book?